I would have a couple of minor edits for clarity.
Point 6 I would change the wording to 'resident elected residents'
point 12. I would change the wording to read 'resident elected residents' rather than 'directly elected residents' as it's a little ambiguous.
point 16 I would add to the 50% social homes ..'at traditional social rents'
points 14 and 17 don't need to be bullet pointed but could be served as headers. ( i think its just been missed)
We should have a section on co-ops. Requesting housing stock transfers and more autonomy for existing co-ops.
I would also add something in regarding their original purpose, this could be taken from their initial mission statement as a registered charity.